Black Poetry : OPEN ARMZ

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Late at night when ya soul can't sleep
    my arms are open gentle & sweet
    when so many scares are cut very deep
    open arms my love will sweep
    whatever broken i will mend
    be that lover brutha & friend

    In open arms my soul wit take
    give warmth, da vow never fake
    from ya slumber ya eyes will wake
    to open arms devine love mates
    to kiss away any tears
    caress & comfort ya soul from fears
    inside this created arms of cares
    is da strength of a billion years

    Remove any silent painz
    replace'd by sensual flames
    once in these armz of tame
    where it's all claim
    from these armz i brang
    glittering sparkled reflection
    tender mild affection
    a cherished compassion
    and won't disturbed ya direction
    in these open armz.


    :wave: :dance: :wave:
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can you believe it rich i wont touch it i will let you get your shine on. nice flo poet.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must admit $$RICH$$, I want too, but I'm not. It's already perfectly devine.
    Much luv.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big thankz Nevar but u can rock it , touch it , work it , shine in it
    to complete it .........


    Big thankz 4EVERLUV , why not .....go head let go what's in ya head
    make it raw flow and all.

    Thankz to you both from my poetic heart for the visit and love y'all gave
    to this piece just too kind .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like you must have mighty big arms to hold all that love, but anything is possible. Lovely vibe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    These armz are big indeed it's possible
    want me to show u .......Thankz watz
    for the love and sweet visit inside my armz.
     
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    Extremely beautiful Rich!
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    brotha, you just shine....just charm the ***** out of the women....you got that gift...


    "Remove any silent painz
    replace'd by sensual flames"

    nice stanza....you just up the game...i can't compete...lol
     
  9. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is this what the love doctor is up to when he's off duty... tsk tsk mr. rich... i declare you are just too much... overwhelming to the senses... loved it poet...
     
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    hey abstract u know we like two peas in a pot
    big thankz for the love and visit within .............

    IfUcomesoftly the Love Doctor work never done just another magical potion
    from the black bag of warmth to da heart wit cares , big thankz sis for the
    love & visit within da arms of mines ..........................................................
     
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