Black Poetry : open all night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gempis, Oct 8, 2003.

  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eyes droop south
    body worn out
    gotta lay down
    this time
    there's no way
    sleep can't come
    but
    the minute I hit the bed
    thoughts, like a storm
    touch down in my head
    I'm racing along on a train
    can't find the brake
    then there's my body
    also wrapped up
    you know it's wack when
    you're laying there with
    all muscles clenched
    even worse
    it's 1:30
    3:20
    5:15
    6:35
    and finally 7:30
    don't wanna wake up and
    see all those times but
    I do
    this ain't sleepin, baby, but
    that's nothing new
    I know why I worry
    I know why I stress
    what I don't know is how to
    quiet the mess
    hard to relax
    I would rather ride
    but there's too much anxiety
    on the inside
    peace
    I want some
    inner world
    peace
    today I feel good
    I got some rest
    don't know if I can again tonight
    but I'll try my best
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gempis...you must get out of my head...LOL..just kidding
    this flow just sounds like me lately...constant worry
    and tense muscles.......

    but your flow is awesome...well crafted and articulated...
    Definitely feeling your work! :wink:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well done...
    i have alot of these nights..
    much love girl
     
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    same here...
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelic, you made me laugh. I'm glad we could share this but at the same time, I wish for your sake you weren't in my head. :)

    Ola, thanks for feelin me and for the love, sister. Back atcha.

    Your kind words mean so much, mzblk. Love you too.

    Jazz4u, thanks girl.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya.....
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah....and cheack ya PM's
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe u was reading me well
    i know dis so well wow!!!!
     
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    yeah this is real...
    frick'n restless nights...
    i be have'n em too...
    well felt piece this is...word
    peace
    khasm
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    foxy, thanks for the word, girl.

    $$RICH$$, your kindness and suppport is always so warming. I appreciate it.

    Khasm, thanks for stopping by. Means a lot, man.
     
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