Quiet Poetry Lounge : Oops!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Jul 6, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Oops! My mind stumbled across your thoughts
    and tripped over the chaos that was jam packed
    inside There was no order no logic and nothing
    made sense ... or so it seemed

    Oops! Excuse my heart for tripping over the
    shadow of what I assumed was your soul --how
    was I to know that it was laying in the aisle
    unattended uncared for undeserving of my
    gentle touch~I only knew that I wanted to get into the
    core of your being ... but it seems now that
    the path I took was the wrong one

    Oops! I broke more than my neck to give kindness
    where I thought I should but in return all I received
    was a "we"ak-less precaution ... signs that yielded to
    his "right of way"... verbal, yet non-communicative
    indictments drawn up from prosecuting poetry that
    locked me up -- N2 your Soul's prison --
    a penitentiary to serve out time for "love crimes"
    sentenced to die ~ by "black ink" lethal injection
    ... my spirit resides behind the walls on death row

    Oops! I was actively pursuing someone to share my
    love with him, but he was indifferent ...sterile, and
    disinterested in what I was willing to give --
    and yet all that he had left to say was...

    ..............Oops! So Sorry...............



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    WOW!! BEAUTIFUL

    NO NEED TO BE JUST COME TO ME
    AND RESIDE INSIDE MY HOME
    WHERE U CAN ROAM FREE
    OOOOPS!!
    DID I SAY THAT!
    YES!
    I REALLY LOVE THIS PIECE .........THANX:toast: :heart: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  3. Nappygrl

    Nappygrl Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 4, 2001
    Messages:
    57
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    not something I love
    Location:
    cold cold Michigan
    Ratings:
    +0
    ****, yall are some gifted folks!

    I'm shaking my head in disbelief at how smooth you came with this one.
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2001
    Messages:
    7,648
    Likes Received:
    40
    Occupation:
    thrivin' spiritually/physically/emotionally/financ
    Location:
    where failure is not an option
    Ratings:
    +42
    So'ja not sterile

    so OOPS won't be in the same sentence as me

    Soul you know i had to mess with you

    i love your style your art

    YOUR MENTAL
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2001
    Messages:
    1,495
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Education/Administrative
    Location:
    Metro Detroit
    Ratings:
    +0
    N2

    You too tight luv! Likin' ya style, but you already know dat...

    Respect
    Reas
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    YEP!

    You said it $$RICH$$ -- Oops again!!

    Thanks for the :heart:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    NpG~

    Thanks for showin' a sistah some :heart:

    Hope you enjoyed!

    One.
     
  8. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    1,154
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    African Dance Instructor/Cultural Educator
    Location:
    Buffalo
    Ratings:
    +0
    oh hayell no!!!

    see...i already have an attitude right now...

    sounds to me like he IS Sorry...a sorry excuse of a human being!!:mad:

    still a tight scribe N2:)
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    So'ja

    Keep it comin' Boo!

    :heart:
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Reason

    I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.

    Thank you.

    One.
     
Loading...