Black Poetry : oop! I did it again

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naujae, Dec 7, 2004.

  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oop! I did it again
    I didn't mean to but I sleep with my best friend
    it's something about him that turns me on
    we went out last night and he song me a song
    I told him before that it couldn't be like this
    because if something goes wrong his friendship i'll miss
    i try to keep my composure when i'm by his side
    but all i can think about is taking a ride.

    oop! I did it again
    I called him up on the phone
    i miss him and i'm all alone
    he know my wants and needs
    he also know how to please me
    how can i control myself?
    but in the back of my mind i don't want nobody else.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess it all really boils down to...
    Sleeping with your "best friend" ..or
    Sleeping with your "enemy" ...
    you make the choice.
    nice piece, I enjoyed the write up poet, thanks for sharing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    go get ya lover honey !!!
    tyte drop
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop....enjoyed the read
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you did it AGAIN...well...may you stay best friends...
    enjoyed the flow
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well gurl you cant play the borders too long lol but understandable :)
     
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    best lovers

    Friends are the best lovers, go for broke and be happy. I like this!!
     
  8. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for all of your responds :nuts:
     
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