Black Poetry : Ooooh What Does It Mean To Me?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Jul 9, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Poetry
    What it is to me
    A sweet melody and sweet remedy
    I hear it in my ears
    Speak it to my peers
    And learn it beyond my years
    Helps me overcome my fears
    Out in the light I feel so good
    Like the little homeboy that could
    Only I'ma girl,soon to be young adult
    I ain't no woman
    My many years are yet to be woven
    But you ask what is this on this paper
    Or girl how do you get this stuff in ya mind
    I ask them simply are you blind?
    Poetry is not just writen or spoken it's drawn
    Beautifully
    Like a colorful painting of oranges,lime greens,and hot pinks
    Getting it all out not caring what others think
    Betta than fun times at the skatin rinks
    Tastier than thick Pinto beans and collard greens
    It's my time to shine with my rhymes and well-developed mind
    My Poetttttrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee
    ooooooh what does it mean to me :shades:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I completely agree...

    Nice rhythm you've woven into this flow.

    Keep it up Poet!

    This vibe is cool...
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go'head Poet
     
  4. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for the love :luv:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a wonderful piece and thanks for sharing this part of your life.
     
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    u captured the essences of poetry well
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love and encouragement:wink:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very vibrant piece about poetry, nicely done.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice piece
    enjoyed it as always
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed poeticly yesssssssssssss!
    love this piece here keep flowing
     
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