Black Poetry : OOH EYES SHOW ME THE TRUTH(2nd.edit)

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  1. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    OOH EYES,SHOW ME THE TRUTH(2nd.edit.)


    Paint and beauty i desire;
    'Cause a man in gold i admire;
    I've been searching all my life;
    But away my ambitions fly;

    He coats in golden suits 'n silver plates;
    Yeah,the one i've been waiting to date;
    Rarely do i know the heart is a farm of thorns;
    where pain and misery are borne;

    And darkness flow like a river;
    Yes,the drums 'n bells of hell ring 'n linger;
    Yet,the ware house of lies and deception;
    OOh,the foundation of my ruin 'n distruction;

    But O eyes teach me to see truth 'n reality;
    That i should judge not by gold or money;
    But by the truth and nature of love;
    which knows not the bounds of dusk or dawn;

    And knows not the lords creature by color;
    Neither does it know light or darkness;
    But an ocean of love, peace 'n happiness;
    Which forever inhabits the depths of my bossom;

    OOh eyes,what you see is disillusion;
    And you will lead me to distruction;
    Only teach me to judge not by sight or garments;
    But by the truth in the hearts and minds of men.;

    "For the ways that seemeth right onto a man;
    the end thereof are ways of distruction".
    (proverbs 14:12).
    MacGeo(Holland)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right on the path to a just reward!
     
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    your flow
    is so deep
    mentally feeling
    you on this
    Peace
     
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    this was very beautiful my eyes on the prize after this here
    love it ........flow on ! speaketh
     
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    WoW this was great writting here. And the flow was great too!!!!!!!!
     
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    Very well scribed. I like this. Thanks for sharing.

    Welcome to DESTEE. MacGeo
     
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    this was great
     
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