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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by oldsoul, Dec 26, 2003.

  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    ONLY


    Only CREATOR can write a perfect song.
    It could be sung in every tongue
    And not a single word is wrong.
    It would be # 1 on the charts Forever.
    Only CREATOR could write such a song.

    Only CREATOR can paint a perfect picture.
    So beautiful it would make the blind see.
    So powerful it would heal all broken hearts.
    So brilliant it would glow in darkness
    and light a pathway to the lost.
    Only CREATOR could paint such a picture.

    Only CREATOR can write a perfect prayer.
    It would bring peace to the ill at ease,
    Bring a cure to all disease,
    And bring an end to all our wars.
    Only CREATOR could write such a prayer.

    Only CREATOR can make a perfect plan.
    And then create a perfect man
    Complete with endless possibilities
    To appreciate the wonder of
    All of CREATOR's perfect art.
    Only CREATOR could make such a plan.
    ONLY.

    OldSoul(2003/12/26)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so beautifully written had me in smiles & awwwwe
    wow.....flow on
     
  3. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truth

    only is true
    only is powerful
    man im love that
    flows like a waterfall full of passion

    Gen~Ethic
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Old soul....................


    this is just wonderfull....



    only the creator choose you to write such a Poem..


    thank you for reminding us..




    Love Liberty
     
  5. Bluewater

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    i am so touched by your poem...wonderful peace from within deep
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  6. triniti424

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    I am blessed with this beautiful piece/peace...:grouphug:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The wonders of the creator...nicely done.
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is truely amazing...
    and if I, had ten thousand tongues...
    I'd speak it to the world that, you know...what you know.
    surely poet...
    I'm watching the "creator's" work...through you :welldone:
     
  9. PurpleMoons

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    This is beautiful! The creator must have kissed your mind, cause only the Creator can inspire such a beautiful write!
     
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    Leave it to brother oldsoul to hit us with the truth
    Thank you for sharing.