Black Poetry : Only Peep Around (for: LovelyGoldenOne)

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ONLY PEEP AROUND
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    When you...
    Are are all alone
    No one there,
    To hold

    Just you...
    Out in a cold world
    Where nobody
    Cares for you

    Just by believing,
    In a whole new love
    You're found...

    No more deceiving,
    In a brand new place
    So warm!

    We'll share,
    Just going there
    Where good love,
    Feels at home

    Come on,
    It's goin' down-
    Girl...
    Just have a look around

    It's worth receiving,
    The break of dawn-
    He calls...

    It's real, no teasing
    He dearly loves us
    Lost and found

    So worth believing,
    The only game-
    In town...

    Always revealing,
    Praise God!
    The only truth-
    I've found (mercy)

    But for the lonely
    God's the only-
    Peep,

    The holy seek,

    The only Peep...
    Around ~ :heart:

    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a beautiful dedication. Keep em comin.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said and beautiful .....one will love dis
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must agree with Alize & Rich this was.......beautiful!
    and yes she will love it.
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~
     
  6. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was nice and beautiful.
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful..wonderful
    Peace
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this a wonderfully written piece,and very beautiful.
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...i wasn't even expectin' somethin' like this...this was REALLY beautiful and upliftin' to me...i thought people had kinda forgot about me since i haven't been here in a while....its good to know that some haven't...thanks:D
     
  10. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww...im gonna cry now..:cry: that was SO SWEET!
     
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