Black Poetry : Only Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Flor_Rosada, Jan 14, 2004.

  1. Flor_Rosada

    Flor_Rosada Member MEMBER

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    My love, my only love, bring your love to me,

    I want to know how you are mentally.

    What do you desire in life; what makes you happy?

    What kind of person are you; how is your personality.

    What kind of future do you want; how do you want to be sucessfully,

    Are you indeed materialistic; do you value money religiously?


    My love, my only love, bring you love to me,

    I want to know how you are physically.

    How tall are you; do you represent a strong capacity,

    Tell me how your face looks; how do you smile when you are happy.

    The color of your hair; the reflection of your eyes,

    What makes you different from other guys.


    My love, my only love, bring your love to me,

    I want to know how you are intimately.

    Are you a classic gentleman; do you love romantically,

    Will you send flowers to your favorte friend indeed.

    Do you rush into relationships; do you slow down or take a breathe.

    Please, I want to know if you are into me?
     
  2. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    i like it alot
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you on this one, when you fall in love and you just wanna know everything about that person that you just become a part of that person...this was very lovely. much love to you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely written tyte scribing
    and welcome within da family of love
     
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    Hi:wave: Welcome
    this is a deep flow....:grouphug:
    nice indeed
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    this has a playful underlying
    innocence...and nice rhythm


    Welcome to the Family! :wave:
    Love-ful Flow...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome sista :)
    :wave:
    you know we have a TEEN voice chat you ARE family now so...dont be a stranger :)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flor_Rosada,

    Welcome. We are so into you...
     
  9. Flor_Rosada

    Flor_Rosada Member MEMBER

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    :love: Thank you for all this love. This poem I wrote directly from my heart. :love:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sounded heartfelt and true...keep writing poet.
     
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