Black Poetry : only love

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  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****, the first day i stared in your eyes, and
    knew you were mine.
    Wrote you the most intimate love letter
    telling about love and how we're suppose to be together.
    I thought for sure you were the guy for me,
    then my friends started to point out things i didn't see.
    I thought i saw love at first sight,
    i thought you were my only love.
    You chose lust over love,
    and fantasy over reality.
    You chose her over me,
    how could this possibly be.
    Your suppose to be my only love.
    **** if i can't trust love then who can i trust?
    You ran good game pa,
    i'll give you your props.
    You swept me off my feet like a fairytale dream,
    told me things only imagination could believe.
    sooooo.......
    i guess this means your not the guy for me!!!!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    reality truth spoken within
    u posed a lovely flow
    keep da ink dropping
     
  4. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    hey you guys thanx i'm glad to know u like it i will be writing more you know i have to spread the wizdom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    yes share so many can hear da word
    ya talent has been placed upon us
    so grace us again & again
    Thank u
     
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