Black Poetry : Only if

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  1. Edward Dzonze

    Edward Dzonze New Member MEMBER

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    If i can make
    and you could unconditionally have
    then thats coexistence,
    a basic fundamental of humanity.

    If i can speak
    and you could listen,
    agreeing and disagreeing for the good,
    If you can know how to drive
    along the various paths of humanity
    and i could swallow the pride and ride
    then thats collectivism,
    the pill to our quest for civilisation.

    If we can conqure
    our racial predilections and pride
    then we can cure
    this intermittent exotropia towards the other.
    Only if....,
    then we can see beyond the physical
    and take pride in being humane.
     
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    Welcome Brother,

    We are listening intently. ~ LOVE to Zimbabwe
     
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    Glad to know i am walking alone...you give me the strength to soldier on
     
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    strong voice as I hear you ......the path is yours continue on !

    great post my friend , welcome to the house of expression
     
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    Thanks dear for reading....there is no purpose in writing if people dont get the message,am glad you did hey
     
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