Black Poetry : Only if.......

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only if
    the words you speak were true....
    Only if
    these walls could speak to you..
    Tell you that I'm not playin' when i say
    tHAT THIS BABY IS MINE
    Not only yours,Look,
    she resembles Me in every way....

    Only if
    you knew how specially hurt i felt...
    When you walked away..
    and gave the wind all of your
    nice things to say..(sarcastic)
    bleep this...bleep that...
    C'mon shorty rock.......
    RETREAT BACK....to where you lay...
    in fact I'm goin' home..

    I'm home my forty pops......


    Only if
    i could stop drinkin' my pain away...
    friends...friends are good...
    they always have sumthin to say...

    "Lurk--ya killin' ya self....
    The baby's fine...."
    lately this crayzie shyts been on my crayzie mind
    and to me it ain't fine.......

    Bottlin' my sorrow until 2morrow....
    This life is real.....thats why Lurk just try ta deal....

    Bottlin' my sorrow until 2morrow...
    This life is real...thas why Lurk just try ta deal....

    Only if
    i had a penny for every kiss she gave me...
    I'll be $Rich$ yet I'm always gonna miss my baby...
    Only if
    i could see her every day....
    love her in every way...
    show her in every way...

    But this drama is causing some heavy crying
    thinking I'm dying.....
    oNLY IF....MAYBE....oNLY IF....MAYBE



    I could keep my baby..........

    But cant go through that court shft...
    Me -n- you is one big moving warship...
    tAngled forever 'cause of her...
    I've been a lil more compassionate...
    to the situation while you've been on some bullshyt....
    BUGGIN' but not cause you dont love me anymore....

    Bottlin' my sorrow until 2morrow....
    This life is real.....thats why Lurk just try ta deal....

    Bottlin' my sorrow until 2morrow...
    This life is real...thas why Lurk just try ta deal....

    Only if
    sHe knew tha way i feel................................................





    Sept. 2,2003 LurK oNeZ


    wrote this on da spot...just the way i feel yall.....

    one love....
     
  2. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    I love this, a love for a child, Im feeling ya pain.
    Keep on flowin my brotha!
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lurk, i got to hand it to ya. This was really off da chain 4 real. Keep up the good work and welcome back youngun.

    1 luv,

    AM
     
  4. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH YEAH GIRLZ....THANX FOR THA LOVE....

    THIS WAS WWRITTEN FROM THA HEART...WOULDNT WANT TA WISH THIS ON ANYONE YA KNOW....
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    omg, this is soo deep and beautiful. I felt ur pain in this, keep ur head...
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm sorry for your pain and i felt it in every word. keep flowin'
     
  7. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was some powerful stuff...keep writing
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was........heart wrenching

    it's amazing what the love of a child can do

    you see the world through very different eyes...

    I loved this!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this a lot...sorry for your pain..
    it was written with care and was deep
     
  10. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that means alot ta me guyz....once again..thanx for tha love....
    things'll get better though..they always do.......and im a keep my head up....

    one