Black Poetry : Only if you knew!!

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  1. reggaediva

    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On my way to the Chinese hair place,
    A bundle and a half of european straight is what I'll take.
    I plan on having my hair hooked up before I go on this date.
    $30 for the hair and 45 for the due,
    ****! I as I shook my head.
    Only if he knew.
    Now the hair is fixed, so the out fit has to be tight,
    I think my knew Azzure' set would do just right.
    But wait a minute the zipper is stuck,
    The door bell rings! "What the ****?!"
    Who could it be at my time of struggling?
    Ouch! I got my skin caught in this **** thing, that what i get for rushing.
    I open the door and who could it be,
    My worrisome neighbor trying to borrow something from me.
    "Hell naww!" and I slammed the door.
    I look over at the clock and it's 7:54.
    I got a couple of minutes before its 8,
    All of this he better not be late.
    I'm aggrivated now and feeling a little stress,
    after all this I better go finish getting dress.
    The bell rings and it's him dressed from head to toe in blue.
    "You look beauiful!" he said,
    And the only thing that could come out my mouth was
    "Thanks, Only If You Knew!"
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very cute... I loved this flow! Much LOVE to you!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think we've all been there, trying to look just so, and everything just going so wrong...liked this flow.
     
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    ahhhh yes. the days of "only if he knew..." don't miss them either. now my dates are with a movie and my cat. I guess all of that got old but very well done your piece brought me back to a time ........thanks for the memories
     
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    :lol: my sister use to do that all the time..rushin and bustlin and squeezin LOL I always played the "Staller"
    "she's almost done...
    any minute now...
    ummm shes comin out soon"
    :laugh:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya on dis here .........
     
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    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JAH THANK YOU ALL FOR THE INSIGHT GIVEN TO ME ON THIS AND OTHERS PIECES. DEFINITLY LOVELY..............ONE........
    BLESSINGS INTINUALLY
     
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