Black Poetry : Only Eyes 4U

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a lovely vision,
    wonderfully wrapped in white.
    The first thing in my eyes,
    pure pleasure to my sight.
    Look at you standing there,
    a loving sparkle in the eye.
    My heart thumps in my chest,
    so fast that it makes me high.
    Memories leading to this moment
    come flooding into my mind.
    It seems like only yesterday,
    I lucked into such a find.
    The organ strikes a familiar note,
    a teardrop comes to my eye.
    I just can’t help myself
    and I don’t even want to try.
    Your face glows sweet radiance,
    wrapped with your dazzling smile,
    I just wish it were me standing there
    when you walk down the aisle.

    Amun-Ra :cry:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i took inside da vision of her beauty as we took that walk
    into everlasting this was so warm
     
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    Amun-Ra:
    Oh how sweet...this was too cute.:)


    Much Luv
     
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    We all have those moments of what could have been, this was bittersweet poet.
     
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    What a vision of :heart: I see some one has a soft spot in their heart... for a lucky lady:spinstar:

    :tennis:

    :picture:
     
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    i likes...truly a great read...

    one.
     
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    Stop the wedding right now bro! I've been there too. Thought that my eyes were consumed by one woman and turns out she wasn't the one. But be thankful that God gave us two eyes so that we can see that there always another Love. Tight write & Keep up the flow.
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I Could Was Cry

    I heard church bells ring,
    and, I heard a choir singing,
    I saw my love at the end of aisle
    and on her finger he placed a ring.
    I saw them holding hands
    He was standing there with my girl
    I heard them promise
    Til death do us part
    Each word, was a pain
    In my heart, and
    All I could do was cry,
    All I could do was cry,
    I was losing the girl that I love
    and all I could do was cry

    Etta James told the story better, but I stood at the back and then left when I couldn't hold any more. They aren't together anymore, but it never made me feel any better or forget because I always believed it should have been me--Amun-Ra :kiss1:
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo is this real or ?

    i mean dang it looks like somebody shouldn't hold their peace lol

    wow deep man deep
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once Upon a Time

    Once Upon a Time, a young guy fell in love and he knew it was the women he would marry. Too bad for the young man, another held the same dream and that's the way love goes. I still think about it and I think about I could have been the one at the other end of that divorce. Who knows? But, I am happy now and found a woman for all the right reasons and the last among them is that she is fine. Back then, that was a first priority, but beauty without character is like peach cobbler with no crust--Amun-Ra :cook:
     
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