Black Poetry : Only An Instrument

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Aug 4, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am only an instrument,
    you are the conductor that guide me
    through the musical lights of the day
    through my writing my songs
    the loving care I have for others
    My body is a temple
    that is on borrow time,
    my soul is the passport
    That will one day be by your side.
    I will do all I humanly can to live a good life
    Because I know that one-day you
    my Father will guide me to that light.
    Peace
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very touching Bluewater...
    Touched,
    Angelic
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes the light is in grasp
    Thou Father above
    is the guiding light
    tyte scribe
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks:angelicsageI am so happy you were touch by this thank you

    HeyAlizentang,so glad you like it sistah:heart:

    Hey Rich living the best we can until the light calls us in:)

    wonderful feeling from within:grouphug:
    Peace
     
  6. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Yes, such a beautiful poem, Blue ya know I love ya work.
     
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    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very poignant and introspective
    loved it
    one
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey suddn my sistah :thanks: for the read,i enjoy your flow 2

    Hey Khasm yes indeed. :heart

    Hey Locust i am glad you love it :)

    Peace and Much Love :grouphug:
     
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    Beautiful, prioritized peace!
     
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