Black Poetry : Only A Mother's Love

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  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only you could deal with the things you did
    And still make me feel like your favorite kid
    i know things had to be hard for you
    But i hope you realize- the things i do
    Wether they come out right or wrong
    I can make it through because you made me strong
    When i was at my lowest point throwing my childhood away
    Nobody but my mother could make things sound okay.
    Even when i didn't want to listen and rolled my eyes
    You just popped me one good and continued to advise
    I was listening, i always have, I always will
    And if i seem a little childish at times, it's cause i'm your baby still
    I love you, Mommy, even when i can't say it out loud
    I got plans comin through, to make you proud
    Just don't give up yet, I'm getting better, you see?
    Only a mothers love could bring these changes in me.
    Thank You, Barbara Ann Williams:toast: youre the best.
    love, the baby girl, Ms.Dy
    copywrite4/03alw
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so sweet and warm ....Mother love a bond
    keep flowin
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was sweet,
    i understand.
     
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    I want my mommy. Beautiful, Loved it.
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So sweeeettttt!! remind me of me and my mommie. Heart felt, and wonderful. peace and blessins keep flowin :):):)
     
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