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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, May 12, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bend your thoughts
    entwine your mental
    around every
    scientific thing
    you've never known
    stretch your mind
    to the furthest
    point in your
    galaxy of
    understanding

    then multiply
    what you find
    and
    assign that
    product
    with an exponent
    that equals
    the nth degree

    of
    everything you've
    ever known
    about
    this love
    and
    me

    and I'll meet you
    there
    where
    we
    will break
    each other
    down
    to the simplest
    most
    powerful
    expression
    of life

    1

    (I love the **** outa you!)

    Alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nobody....but you... like you do...

    Bert
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooh, i like this poet.

    b.e.z.
    hw
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms A when you write like this...the world is at peace. Awesome poetry

    BE
     
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    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep!

    S~M
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT WAS TIGHT, ON POINT AND TO THE " T"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alyce again u have open up my mental play
    dis was tyght and very on point sound like
    u know me well and was talking to me.....
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with everything above and then some!! lovin this!