Black Poetry : one

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Aug 28, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rain is falling
    I see you in the distant
    with the gait of a leaf
    drifting to another season
    slow moving deliberate
    accepting each atmospheric kiss
    upon you

    the chiffon button down shirt
    wore you until you stamped
    it's existence with your breast
    on it's breast and I was
    entranced by the synchronicity
    of your erect nipples

    I began to dance as they conducted
    me to / up down in out /
    up down in out of consciousness 'til
    I reached my sub-level where I
    found me dancing
    stripping to a song that you sang for
    you....this physical expression
    of harmony trapped me within
    myself without me knowing
    and when I came too I
    was soaked by the rains
    that you released upon my
    mental tongue...

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLak-NeSs.


    i'm not gonna say a word...

    just know that my flyght arrives at... :lol:

    i loved it!!!

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    where she get them shirts from????? I love the way a brotha admires a sista without being vulgar and obvious. You weren't were you ha ha ha .




    One
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmm... now that's sumthin else!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  5. amirah

    amirah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLAK...

    I admire the way you take the simplest and make it flow...makes a sista proud to just be...Appreciated...beautiful.
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this schitt was erect nipples!!!!

    Dayuuuuuuummmmmmm!!!!!

    :D

    *cup-full-0-flow*
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak...i'm lovin' it! the flo on this piece is just ryght.