Black Poetry : One Word

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Mar 30, 2006.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2004
    Messages:
    586
    Likes Received:
    15
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    New Jersey
    Ratings:
    +16
    I call this one One Word I asked my friends to give me one word to describe what falling in love with that person ya know you aint suppose to or cant have and they did and this is what I came up with.
    Enjoy!

    Wow it is so unexplainable how you and I got to the place we are
    My mind wanders back to the day when it all began innocent at first with
    Just a hint of mischief. Eye contact and unspoken words that said if only I
    Could I surely would. Then that moment when all inhibitions are lost there
    Is nothing that can hold back the feelings that have been smoldering for
    Months, weeks, days, hours, minutes. And then you kiss me accidentally
    On purpose. Ya know you meant to do it but not really just in case I
    Reacted wrong. But I don’t because all my dreams have been of this
    Moment and all my memories will always be of this kiss. This
    One kiss that opens the doors to so much more. I am breathless and
    Confused the flutters of butterflies which are a combination of
    Excitement and fear. My soul is shaken because in all truth
    To have this love is really something I know can’t happen
    To have your love everlasting and you kisses for an eternity.
    But I know this will only end in heart break and I will forever suffer
    From the heart ache. Seeing you will bring back memories that will only
    Bring back the heat of the moment and I know that it was not about
    Lust with you, I really loved you in that 15minutes of kissing I gave
    My heart to you. My cell rings and I come back to reality and I look
    At you and you look at me and now we have a secret we will forever
    Share and a love that will always be there. But I got to go cause the
    Love of my life is on the phone. And so we part knowing that this
    Is the beginning and end of forever…..
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    That say it all , when the notion of wanting and a feeling to love
    mix for someone that will never be .........you express what i
    sometime feels .
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2004
    Messages:
    586
    Likes Received:
    15
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    New Jersey
    Ratings:
    +16
    Yeah I thought this was kinda cool cause it all came from the words they used to describe what they feel about the situation. I hope you liked it.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    O yes i loved it , because it say a lot of what i be feeling
    and can't put in words but knows what i feel..................
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2004
    Messages:
    586
    Likes Received:
    15
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    New Jersey
    Ratings:
    +16
    OK thank you. You always give luv
     
  6. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 18, 2006
    Messages:
    622
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    MY SISTA I WAS REALLY FEELIN DIS, YO FEELINZ ON DIS IZ SO REAL, AND IT AINT NO LIE, SO KEEP IT REAL, AND I FELT LIKE DAT BE4


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
  7. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2004
    Messages:
    586
    Likes Received:
    15
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    New Jersey
    Ratings:
    +16
    Thank ya G.A. for da luv.
     
Loading...