Black Poetry : One Wish...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Upon the heavens at night
    You roam in my mind
    That star…I see
    I wish for a wish…
    To have a wish of you

    If I had one wish
    I would love you until the end of time
    Our love will always be the beginning
    Never seeing an ending
    Just one wish

    Pass beginning into infinity
    As heaven becomes our playground
    Passion is our day
    Love is our night
    Just on that one wish

    Make you my life
    As your wife
    Be your wind
    Wrap you in my warmth
    Be your joy
    Just one wish

    I would be your strength
    On that one wish
    Be faithful unto you
    Feed you love
    Pamper you in passion
    Just on one wish
    Share my life with you
    As we add a new life
    One wish…
    …One wish to be that family

    As I look upon the starz
    I share my wish with you
    That…..

    One day…I wish
    You will realize what you mean to me

    (c) 2005
    One Woman's heart
    Book 2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    upon that one wish all you need is hope and faith
    as that wish become reality , how endearing this was
    and afloating maze of love to be of that one wish
    awesome tyte Angel .........
     
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    I guess "ONE WISH" is all we need...with that right someone, awesome piece poet. And I wish you get that "ONE WISH" you want.
     
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    Great poem, Angel!...Even though my "one wish" will never ever (ever ever) come true, I know that yours will come in fruition. Peace!
     
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    My Brother...But my God shall supply all your need according to His riches in glory by Christ Jesus...

    There is a plan for your life believe in your desires ... let go and let God

    I am happy and thankful you enjoyed my poem

    Peace and Blessings
    Angel
     
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    This was not for me per'say it is for all that have that one wish to love and be loved...wishes do come true...Yanno key word Faith

    thank you and I am honored you enjoyed the flow

    Thank you
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Faith is the key to all things indeed thank you, your support i love it wouldnt change a thing!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    then this was for me , surely i wish and want daily to love and be loved .....
     
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    We all wish to love and be loved. This was quite a heartfelt flow, we never know in this life just what will happen for sure, but some wishes are meant to come true.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    my wish is that your wish...
    comes true...
    thanks mzblkangel..
     
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