Black Poetry : One Wish

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Intrepid, Feb 19, 2005.

  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could have just one wish
    I would wish to...
    Wake up with your breath on my neck
    The warmth of your lips on my cheek
    The touch of your fingers on my skin
    And the feel of your heart beating with mine.....
    Knowing that I could NEVER find that feeling with anyone....
    Other than you
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight. You bringin back a memory :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this something we all lone to have nightly
    that single wish of a sweet love
     
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    Yes, who wouldn't want this for sure. This was so on point and genuinely posed. Flow on with this.
     
  5. molasis

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    Everyone can relate to this one ... you can feel so much emotion in just a few words, that's great. :love:
     
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    One word comes to mind...

    "Charming"

    Love the feel of the words
    they pulled you right into
    the moment with the
    breath, the lips and the fingers...


    Simply stated...
    and Simply put
    "Charming"
     
  7. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love and support for the words that I have dropped
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whewwwwwwwww! bringing up some deep memories for me. The is such a heartfelt piece. A very loving and enduring piece. Flow on!
     
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    l saw a girl's face behind your words... whoa.
     
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    Hi Intrepid
    *sigh* this is so beautiful
    and so lovely
    ah so nice

    Peace
     
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