Black Poetry : One Voice

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blacklove, Apr 13, 2001.

  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    I had a dream, a crazy vision
    It may sound strange,this intuition
    But it was true beyond description
    Somehow i knew it was real

    One sky above
    There is one source of love
    I've got one chance, one choice
    One poem, one voice

    I've seen the fires of deep division
    The hearts of stone ,the cold ambition
    But i have found my sacred mission
    To live in this world and still mention

    That there is , one sky
    There is just one source of love
    I'll write it from the heart
    One poem, one voice.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    scribe poet, scribe...lovin' the flow of this, mos def.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE VISION
    THE POEM
    THE SKIES OF LIGHT
    I LOVE THIS PIECE FLOW POET!
     
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    Yeah,Yeah

    I can see that you have a vision,scribe on brotha!
    Desert Storm
     
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    the flow of it takes me back into time ...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A scribe conceived from a vision, yes a piece can flow just like that. Flow on.
     
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    the vision was a straigh poetic ride enjoyed this....
     
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    buttaflyy New Member MEMBER

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    I don't mean no harm/but your "false reality" is quite a charm/you see, I've heard this song before/and the fact you couldn't be real makes me sore/try to write from within yourself instead of copying from somebody else. (This is an old song that Brandy remade. It is one her Never Say Never CD. Don't believe me? look it up)
     
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