Quiet Poetry Lounge : One vivid recollection of love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by moham, Jun 1, 2007.

  1. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let those who walk away
    Leave behind a smile in your mind
    And let those who stay
    Paint nights and days with every color
    The sound of laughter
    Smells like comfort
    In your ear
    Whispering soothing words
    Can you hear
    Rays of a magical light
    Sensationally bright
    Don’t ever forget
    2 remember
    Love gives life


    (loveu)
     
  2. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa this is beatiful!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love is life as life is love
    yes i feel it and recollecting da essence u painted here
    Thank u Moham
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You put a jewel in a space that could be filled with pain. Wonderful to read you again moham.
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Utterly gorgeous...thank you!
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A soulful thank you to all of you :).
     
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    Mmmm I like that part about let those who walk away leave behind an enduring smile. That's unique and I've never heard it put like that. This is some smooth soul music in poetic form. Nice one!
     
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    moham:
    What a lovely and soothing write.
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not to show off or any such thing, but I was a little *tipsy* when I wrote this poem, so maybe there is where the smoovness came from.
    Tha emissary and 4everluv..thanks!
     
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    Love Does Give Life.

    Tru Dat
    Tru Dat
    Fa Real

    Loved this write. Short, sweet, and complete

    DS
     
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