Quiet Poetry Lounge : One Truth at a Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jun 4, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mysteries often too deep to see
    Too complex to feel
    Life's winding road
    Taking so long to travel
    But
    The rest stop of truth
    Provides an answer
    If only one...it is an answer
    One of many
    Unfolding
    Educating
    Realizing
    So thankful for truth
    The road continues
    Other mysteries await
    They have always been there
    They will also be answered
    One truth at a time

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving

    how you characterize truth as a 'rest stop'. And as hard as truth can be, acceptance brings about the sweetest experiences of all : PEACE.

    thank you for this. You be the 'excellent' one!

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  3. blacmajic

    blacmajic Active Member MEMBER

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    "Mysteries often too deep to see
    Too complex to feel
    Life's winding road
    Taking so long to travel"


    The opening is hard hitting. It says so much...how we don't know the truth until we seek it, and how some of us don't want to accept it when we find it. And actually, some of us don't want to look for it. We just walk around until we happen to stumble upon it.

    This is nice
     
  4. MORE

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    wow
    thats deep and true.
     
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