Black Poetry : One Track

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Mar 29, 2004.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok, i'm gonna stop floodin the site.lol.just had to put this one up.


    ****, I need 2 get off this one track ride. I'm not goin newhere. I should be goin in the opposite direction, on another train, as far away from u as possible. But instead I choose 2 ride n waste my time.

    Ur like the L n G train...always goin cross town n never my way. I should've faded away, stop bein the only passenger on ur train. But ****, this brain of mine, or is it my heart that wont let me depart.

    We were once 2 trains runnin the same route... then u started slippin up, havin mad accidents. U left me no choice but 2 go 2 mad transfer points. But I would always find my way back 2 u.

    Now we not even on the same line... cuz I told u I loved u n wanted u 2 b mine. U decided to play games, like trains that take mad long when u in a rush. U should've known..what the fu*!?? U layed the tracks, so y were u holdin back??

    I had 2 look at a map, discover the other ways 2 get out of this trap. I couldnt afford 2 go back, then it'd be a wrap.

    Lets take a ride down this complicated trip...
    Our destination...renewed friendship.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u go gurl this was tyte
    flow on poet of the week it's ya shinning moment
    flood
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was creatively written. Showing off the skills of the pen, as well as your skills taking that subway huh? Flood if you like, it's your week!!
     
  4. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx $$Rich$$. lol @ watz. livin in nyc, i better know the train system like it was the back of my hand.lol. much love :)
     
  5. Earthly Allure

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    I'm truly diggin this piece ma. Keep em coming. Their right, its your week to shine. Do ya thang. One love.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    saracasm
    this was fabulous...fabulous.
    and maybe because I'm from new york city...when you said the L and G trains...i knew you were going through some pains..(I had to smile)
    keep on flowing..
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    chuga chuga chuga chuga train coming full speed let me pull this thang ova...you are truly gifted :coffee:
     
  8. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sensual-- thanx for feelin this poem.
    deepy-- lol. the L n G trains are the worst trains in the MTA. thanx for feelin me.

    much love to the both of y'all :)
     
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    you are flowing deep
    poet of the week
    liking this
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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