Black Poetry : One Track

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, May 6, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****, i need 2 get off this 1 track ride.im not goin newhere. i should b goin in the opposite direction, on another train, as far away from u as possible. but instead i choose 2 ride n waste my time.

    ur like the L n G train....always goin cross town n never my way. i should have faded away, stop bein the only passenger on ur train. but ****, this brain of mine, or is it my heart that wont let me depart.

    we were once 2 trains runnin the same route......then u started slippin up, havin mad accidents. u left me no choice but 2 go 2 mad transfer points. but i would always find my way back 2 u.

    now we not even on the same line...cuz i told u i loved u n wanted u 2 b mine. u decided 2 play games, like trains that take mad long when u in a rush. u should have known...what the f%^&?? u layed the tracks, so y were u holdin back??

    i had 2 look at a map, discover the other ways 2 get out of this trap. i couldnt aford 2 go back, then it'd b a wrap.

    lets take a ride down this complicated trip........
    our destination.......renewed friendship.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! dis was awesome flowin'
    u rock dis to perfection i love it !
     
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    awww, thanx.......i always appreciate ur words,even the freaky ones lol. i was so unsure of this piece.......much love :)
     
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    love ur flow, i love how u set that up. the train and the tracks, but baby let me tell u its even harder to not look back!
     
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    thanx poeticlyspeakin.......wasnt sure if the setup would work.....yea i know, i have all the memories, playin like a **** movie.lol ur work is tight, keep writin..........much love :)
     
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    yeah! its all that.
     
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    thanx purplemoons...can u teach me how to spit freaky words.lol much love :)
     
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    u didn't need my help on dis one it was tyte
    most welcome sista
     
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    thanx 4 the words of encouragement........never knew i would get so much love for words that r just ramblins to most people......wanna give a shout out to all the peeps who responded to my stuff...........1
     
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    loll! @ sarcasm
     
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