Black Poetry : One times Two

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Apr 9, 2001.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One moment in time is all most dare to dream
    But I have dared to break the iron bonds of time, paused my world,
    realigned the sun moon and stars
    Tempted the beast of impossibilities and embraced the ever elusive prey of opportunity,
    and have found myself just where I want to be,
    So if you don’t mind I will adjust my F-stop, and freeze the moment that I chased the dream seized the moment and found the beauty of my first love in the refined grace and beauty that is you “WOMAN”
    Though our ways may part as the planets return and life goes on,
    Know this; You have been and ever shall be loved by someone.
    Thank you for the moment times two.
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot!

    i really loved this lyrical verse, shaz! i didn't know you had it in you! hot, baby, hot.
    -7
     
  3. Destee

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    very nice flow Shaz
    thank you for sharing it with us
    for bringing it HOME!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL DONE POET
    LOOKING BACK OVA THE YEAR
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    like this flow
    very nice indeed
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW

    this was a splendid poetic journey
    the way your structured this flow
    and the energy & confidence that
    exudes...was simply beautiful

    love the way you crafted this...
     
  7. watzinaname

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    What a beautiful scribe....I love reading these wonderful vibes.
     
  8. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really nice, beautiful!
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bittersweet sentiment here!

    Welcome home dear scribe, we missed your soulful vibes.
    I know that you have much to say...glad you took the time
    to say it today!

    Blessings On Your House! :grouphug:
     
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