Black Poetry : one thought of you...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, May 8, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....that night when reality "kicked in"... unannounced
    l think l was reading
    maybe writing business ideas in madd pursuit
    until in some weird way you entered my dome
    at home
    at my desk the thought of how your love put me in a trance....
    the way our hearts dance
    the way we align is like the pyramid to the Orion
    my horizon
    broadens at your presence in the morning...
    l kiss your lips
    while blessing you silently in my heart...
    thanking my God for a friend
    a sister
    a lover
    & wife-to-be...
    finding it hard to believe that such a queen
    is spending the rest of her life with me...

    l drop my pen and celebrate within...
    now l await her to come home
    to her favorite dish
    a love like this should always be meditated
    and appreciated..

    are you surprised by the eucalyptus flames
    and a couple of glasses of Madeira wine
    set at our table as you enter in?
    you didn't know l would do this again
    as the classic begins to play...

    ~~l only think of you.. on two occasiooons, that's day.. and niiight...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    j'h man u bringing it on
    dis flow took me on a spin
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful

    I know she has to like this poem. I don't how much more she can take before yall finally jump the broom. This craft of yours is branded in her heart for sure.

    How have you been???


    Your twin...Joyce
     
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    tru loves bond is hard to break
    we need more tru love in the world
    for pete sake
    instead of the heartache
    i remember the first time i made you quiver
    by simply holding you in my arms
    life is love and love is life
    cause when i look in your eyes
    i see the infinite stars

    this was a lovely piece bruh...
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the flow of this and i can deifinitly feel what you're sayin...
     
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