Black Poetry : one sided...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 30, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see, the problem with this is
    umm, you know cause
    we communicate our ideas
    clearly?
    and that thing you said
    the other day
    okay, last week
    really hurt my feelings
    cause you know that i'm umm
    ******** sensitive!
    but we can work through this
    love conquers all right?
    and we're in love
    or
    something close to it
    cause we're together alot
    and i know you feel like i do
    well, maybe not exactly
    but we're kinda similar
    so lets just talk this out
    and after that
    we'll be okay
    cause we're good at
    listening to each other right?
    umm, what did you say?
    oh, yeah and that other thing
    you know
    that happened the other day?
    well, its okay cause
    i know you really didn't mean it
    you apologized
    and i know you were sorry
    so even though its not the first time
    i know you won't do it again
    okay?
    whew! glad to get that out of the way
    it can build so much pressure
    and
    i know that talking makes it better
    and we communicate so well together
    it makes things so much easier
    so we're okay now right?
    right?
    WHY AREN'T YOU LISTENING TO ME??!!!
     
  2. deepgrrl

    deepgrrl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK Derrick, you hit me right between the eyes with this one. Amazing how long we'll run in circles and mistakenly call it the dance of love. Thank you for another sip from your cup of wisdom.
     
  3. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx...sometimes listening can be more important than speaking

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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