Black Poetry : One of Those Days

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 28, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Guess I'm having one of those days
    Energy level low
    Mind in a haze
    Dare I say I even got me an attitude
    Been short with good folks
    Discourteous and rude

    Perhaps I'm flashing back
    To days gone by
    When I didn't give a *****
    When I didn't laugh
    I didn't cry
    Days of my youth
    You wouldn't want to know me
    No one
    Not even God (or so I thought)
    Could even try to control me

    Feeling a bit like that right now
    Mean streak coming through
    I don't know how
    Feeling like my feet hurt
    Got a tooth ache
    Headache
    Backed up
    All at the same time

    Yeah
    One of those days
    I can't even go home
    Need to go somewhere
    Need to be alone
    Where the hell can that be?
    This day needs to be over
    Cause I'm too through with me

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    EXPRESS INNER SELF

    LET IT OUT .......MAN I FEEL YA I BE LIKE THIS
    SOME TIME .................BLOW OF SOME STEAM!
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww soooooo sad

    don't like it when my friends are feeling this way...even in poetry

    'Tuesday' has a lot of explaining to do!!:maddd:

    *through*
     
  4. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rest assure
    there is a door
    walk right through
    you'll feel brand new
    just pass with time
    the sun will shine
    tomorrow will bring
    a whole new ryhme....
     
  5. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gonna hold you to that Mr. M.
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this

    completely...


    a
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey BE

    someymes **** happens. I know how you feel, my desk looks like someone backed a dumptruck up and unloaded a gazillion files on my desk, working late, got a tooth pulled and I cant eat, feet hurt like hell and the next person look my way gone get snapped on. Yeah but I just thank God that Im livin to feel that. We gone be alright, cause somebody out there doing worse than we are. I'll send you some Green Tea, and a pillow.


    ****ZZZZZZZZ, scoot ova Be******





    One
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    You need to have one of Miss Alyce's, "nothing days"
    to see you through...I guess we all feel like this sometimes..
    keep smilin..

    K
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice work bro, no doubt.

    blak
     
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