Black Poetry : one of those days

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Dec 9, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    having one of those days
    indecision
    broken thoughts
    images
    discontent
    I pray for deliverance from these feelings
    must not have spent enough time kneeling
    cause they are right there
    in the office glare of those ugly white lights
    they just want me to get it right
    don’t care if I’m sleepy or exhausted
    lack the fight
    my concentration slips
    my mental does a dip
    I just want to write
    indecision
    broken thoughts
    images of
    you and her
    laughing and enjoying one another’s company
    my eyes are burning
    maybe it’s just me
    you spend so much time together
    is there any time left for me
    I’m trying to remember if I care
    or if maybe it’s just the glare of these
    fluorescent lights
    got to get it right
    maybe I’m just being paranoid
    I mean
    you wouldn’t do that to me
    not after all of these years
    I see us growing old together
    but maybe she’s your fair weather…friendship
    indecision, broken thoughts
    I just have to focus
    I’m having one of those days
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' wow RED this was deeply and well posed tyte write
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am feeling this all the way down the page..nicely posed
     
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    I know the feeling all too well my sista...
    I get MANY of those days lol
    be well :grouphug:
     
  5. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love...gues i'm in a reality mood.
     
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    ShortyLove21 Active Member MEMBER

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    I am feeling this.....I was so beautiful I am lost for words. Flow on my sister
     
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