Quiet Poetry Lounge : one of other nights

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by simunyaa, Jul 27, 2003.

  1. simunyaa

    simunyaa Member MEMBER

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    even darker than the night surrounding us
    the siluetts of your body
    the summer's heat pretends
    closeness to origin of life

    when will we be home

    feading of other fields
    drinking of other waters
    protected by other roofs
    other skies over different worlds

    whenever the darkness of your skin
    meets the blackness of the night
    moon enlightning the stars of your eyes
    i remember the land on the edge of your being

    wondeing where i belong




    :love: :love:
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simunyaa, welcome. I love this beautiful poem of yours. Looking forward to reading you some more in the near future. Oh, and to insure that your readership grows be certain to comment on other poets work as well. Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well pose love how u displayed this piece
    surely look to read more of u soon
    nice and tyte scribe
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    beautiful
    lovely
    wonderful flow
    Peace
     
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