Black Poetry : One Night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Depth, Mar 9, 2002.

  1. Depth

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    One night, I was sitting in the rain
    with you on the brain
    feelin' deep pain
    from the strain of our relationship
    going down the drain.
     
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    :eeek: Short & sad ... but still a great piece!! :)

    N2
     
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    This was a very good read!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved it ya warm touch is powerful
     
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    until the sound of the rain drops
    began to revitalize my heart
    rain has such a soothing art
    helping all things to depart
    gently washing them apart
    so new things can start


    :wave: Haaaaaaay Depth :wave:

    very nice work ... thanks for the inspiration

    Destee
     
  6. Depth

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    Thanks a million.

    That's a nice piece Destee.
     
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    Depth,

    Kewl!!! Welcome to the Fam!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Thanks GQ.....:)
     
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