Black Poetry : One Night

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One night
    In the midst of it all

    Visions in the mid night hour
    Sparked my flamin desire

    Leaving me to never doubt myself(again)
    And loving me(inspite of what people think)

    One night
    It all came true

    One night I said it all
    In a little prayer

    Tears of joy followed
    And the weight of it all(that dissapointed me)
    All conveniately dissappeared

    Lovin you
    I know a place (called heaven)
    That remains silenced in my domain

    One night
    Sitting by the fire
    I had a story to tell you...(about)
    But you weren't there...
    Deeply...You Make ME Feel So Good.


    Seems so far away

    In detail
    I say to you(not to fear)

    What things may come to you(bold)
    Wither away going in one ear and out the other
     
  2. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am

    intrigued by you

    and that's not easy
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: i am

    Well,it's easy for me!
    Desert Storm
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORMY...

    i really enjoyed this piece...

    it kinda made me wanna say
    joy comes in the morningtime...

    scribe on lil sis...

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks,Sunshyne
    Your screen name reminds me of the song sunshine by Coko. Hope that makes you smile.
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL PUT STORM
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SPEECHLESS!

    I don't know what to say except, ****!
    One_Love
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again one,I told MaddRapper bout the site I hope he got my e-mail. So he'll come,I want to see him here too.
    Desert STorm
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do your thang sis~

    Keep writin' em' & I'll
    keep readin' em!
    I luv the flow of it all!

    Thanks for scribin' this piece and
    sharin' it with us here.
     
  10. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TNKS! GURL!

    I REALLY 'PPRECIATE YOUR FLOW TOO. YOU SOMETHING ELSE! YOU ARE VERY TALENTED IN THE WAY YOU COMMUNICATE YOUR FEELINGS. SOMETIMES THAT'S VERY HARD TO DO. KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK SIS! IT'S A PLEASURE READIN YA!
    ALWAYS AND SINCERELY,
    DESERT STORM
     
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