Black Poetry : One Night

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  1. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Never thought it would happen
    I was never looking for it
    Just doing me
    Forever down with the casual dating scene
    “Single cause I wanted to be”
    So Independent the average guy couldn’t tell me anything
    Flirting was my number one game
    Caught up in doing my own thang,
    Please, whatever you do don’t try to commit me
    Free, free, free as a bird was my favorite tune….
    And then….
    I didn’t know I had feelings
    Never knew I liked being looked at that way
    Felt like completion
    And didn’t know I was under construction
    Didn’t think I could share words so deep
    Had never known my soul had a mate
    Wait…
    My heart
    My mind
    My thoughts and
    My desires
    My wants
    My needs
    My peace
    My life
    Found melodious harmony…
    I just couldn’t believe how
    He knows just how I should be treated
    he knows how to care for me
    He knows how to respect me
    How he would protect me
    It was like he was created just for me
    And then it hit me
    I had fallen in love with the man God meant for me
    In just one night

    By SignedMe​

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a complete feelings that sets ova da heart of emotions
    and the depth of lovin to be loved surely ya friend let some
    deep warm feeling flow here in this one ....Thankz for sharing
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great poem, especially the part not knowing your under construction. It's a beautiful thang ain't it!!
     
  4. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo I know the feeling. I love this piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That moment you realize what has happened, that love, is a moment you don't soon forget. I like the way your friend expressed this Monetary.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    your friend wrote a nice poem...thanks for sharing it with us...
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Yeah, Fam...this piece is tight. The recording is tight as well. She has skill but is skurred...ol' punk. :lol:
     
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