Black Poetry : One Night Stand

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jun 21, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we met up @ tha spot now we're headed to the telly
    he said i should call someone and passed me the celly
    i probably should, but i will when im ready
    naw... im gonna live in the moment n not listen to what my conscience tells me

    as soon as we step into his jeep
    it started up, blazin with heat
    so he pulls over and we head to the backseat
    lickin n kissin from head to feet

    in an amount of 2 hours we went from typsy to wasted
    not caring that we got ourselves in a risky implication
    pulled out the chocolate syrup- its a sticky situation
    all he got to do is kiss me on one spot to give me motivation

    we went from the bed to the floor- the longest seduction
    lasted all night with a couple of breaks and no interruptions
    i know my man at home worried, but my mind has been corrupted
    and after tonight, its soon to be abducted

    every place he touched, he automatically hit the spot
    pulled off every position, he even let me ride on top
    im sore as hell, but i dont wanna stop
    knowin if my man finds out, we're both gettin shot

    it finally ended, we're both out of power
    i sleep for awhile, then i hit the shower
    i cant let my man smell what i just devoured
    its 7 am now, i gotta be home in a hour

    i know it was in the wrong, but for just one night i wanted to be naughty
    my man dont treat me right, he only wants to eat, sleep, and climb up on me
    i needed some excitement and look where the night brought me
    and i cant even remember most of it honestly

    he looks over and his smile hits my way
    i smile back n tell him i gotta go, no more play
    then he leans up n asks if we can do it again some day
    but even tho it was great, my man's at home so i said
    "no way"

    and went back to my normal life...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin...wow..let it flow...one night stand...very nice
    Peace
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you blue...
     
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    Wow.........wowo........wow.........this was TYTE!:)
     
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    oooooooooohhhhhhhh girl this is tyte as hell!! I like this it's so erotic and tempting and also very nicely put. I like tha ending the most :) nice flow as always much luv
     
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    thank u SwtT and Serenti. eh when are we gonna caloborate again SwtT?? that was fun.
     
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    Poet, when ever you're ready to collab :) Girl, you certainly put it down on this piece :)
     
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    but u put it down all the time girl, u start sumthin and ill follow just like last time. im ready now lol.
     
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    aight i got you:)
     
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    This was like whoa! so descriptive - thank goodness for the ending with the sweet and moral touch. It was still "Hot".
    U go girl.
     
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