Black Poetry : One Night Stand

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ONE NIGHT STAND
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    Love' so corrupt,
    Forever leaving...
    Take it or leave it,
    Now that's deceiving!

    Consequently,
    Those bad affairs
    Lay reminiscent,
    In the air ~

    Giddy hitting,
    Around a fire
    Making love,
    Fill our desire

    Lovers dance,
    Away the night
    Embraced in arms,
    We hang on tight

    More lustful trysts,
    To seal our fate
    Before the day,
    We separate

    Something sours,
    And in the end...
    You want some love?
    Put out again

    Precious props,
    Mi amore...
    Needing love,
    Nothing more

    Ocean mists,
    Fog the cove
    This honeymoon,
    Let me snore...


    1poetsought 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a masterpiece written
    love how u pose this to perfection !
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REJOICE!!!

    I been hit,
    by Richy Rich

    Thank you, My Brother-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    Brilliant. I definitely love your flow! :)
     
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    HighEmme Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Winner

    I loved the simplicity of this. So simple yet I found myself being pulled in more with every word and really feelin everything that you were saying. :toast:
     
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    I give this two thumbs up in a foot hope you haven't been in this situation too many times it can be the highest and lowest point of ur night :) I loved this put me right there in your position keep flowin peace and blessins :kiss: to my family
     
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    this is just gorgeous...
     
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    1poetsought --
    you captured this feeling
    in its fullness...
    your life must be a poem
    because you just keep
    kicking out mad flavor...
    what do they got ya'll on in italy?
    peace
    khasm
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1P,

    Nicely done!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indys_Finest,

    I needed to hear that, for I want you in my world-

    1poetsought ~
     
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