Black Poetry : One More Try

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nappygrl, Aug 8, 2001.

  1. Nappygrl

    Nappygrl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHY
    do I feel so uninspired
    WHAT
    Keeps making me feel so tired
    WHY
    is my world so full of muck and mire
    I feel like I just wanna
    Quit and Retire

    DAMNIT YALL!

    I gotta try and find my
    Fire and Desire
    So I can take my life
    Even higher
    But sometimes I feel like
    Why even try
    And all my ambitions
    Just seem to die
    But somehow I know
    In the sweet by and by
    To my rainbowtinteddreams
    I’LL ZOOM
    I’LL FLY
    I can’t keep asking myself
    WHAT
    WHEN
    WHY
    I just gotta give it
    one more college try
    And continue to drop these
    Rhymes so fly
    When I write them
    I feel kinda high
    That **** feels so good
    Makes me almost wanna cry
    So I think I’ll give it
    ONE
    .
    .
    .
    MORE
    .
    .
    .
    TRY


    ©nappygrlflows 2001
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nappy....


    ...dis hea flow... Inspires!!! :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U JUST CAPTURE ME

    ANDNOW I'LL GIVE IT ALL
    ONE
    MORE
    TRY !
    VERY BEAUTIFUL :kiss:
     
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