Quiet Poetry Lounge : One more time....round two

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, May 14, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spent
    it was heaven scented
    lovemaking
    sweaty sheets
    like saran wrap
    over our bodies
    holding you
    dreaming of sleep
    and peace
    til morning
    but..........................
    our thoughts differ
    must be a full moon
    beaming directly into this room
    touching the animal in you
    draining life out of me
    but it's my duty
    No's.............out of the question
    you're too lovely to deny
    baiting me with your eyes
    and body language
    and to no surprise
    spreading of the thighs
    round two
    initiated by you
    :peace:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And in the corner to my right....Liked the way you flowed this spicy scene.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very awesome drop wow !!
     
  4. Tatiana

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    Good read...I enjoyed your flow
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from a man's perspective...

    *whew*...

    a man who aims to please...

    I'll toast to that.. :toast:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good lawd...you gonn try for round three? ;) ...oh that was so nice, I like the way the whole stage was set, ...thanks for sharing.
     
  7. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the kind responses. You guys are crazy. :eek:hmy: :eek:hmy: :eek:hmy:
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

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    :bazooka: You hit that, Kente. This was hot :devil:
     
  9. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was hot...I'm ready for round THREE!
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    even better the second time around...

    loving it!
     
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