Quiet Poetry Lounge : One More Thing...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShadeeLadee, May 15, 2002.

  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    try to forget what I told you
    erase my words from
    your dreams; your memory

    this madness is much better
    for you

    being sober and thinking
    everything through
    somehow destroys
    the beauty of your sponteneity

    (you love to do thangs on the fly)

    so try to forget what I said about
    what you've always known

    (you told me once that you've
    forgotten more things than I've
    known in my life)

    just remember one thing only:

    everthing he is

    Shade
     
  2. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't know who you're talking to here sis, but very certain the advice will be well taken.

    Love the flow of it!

    Bert
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well felt .......dis speak high wit a blast.....flow head on!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True dat.
    hmmph !!!
    I like this.
    Thankyou. feeling this piece in the moment.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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