Black Poetry : One Minute Past Ecstasy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by klabarron, Dec 28, 2001.

  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The stroke of your firm fingers through my hair.
    There’s a soft palm upon my brow as your heart beats my drum.
    Salt savored, compresses between our two exhausted bodies.
    Head to chest, thigh to thigh, mouth to breast.
    Drips of life trickle from giving places; both given one for another.
    I bask in your glory; tongue so gently pressed, in a lactose tolerant drink.
    The essence of expression, as overflow has flown.
    Niagara has made her fall.

    Sweet nectar fills the air as our minds drift away…

    … just one minute past ecstasy!


    Excerpt from "A Winter's Soulstice"
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    k. laBarron
    Copyright © 2001 Well of 7 Publishing. All Rights Reserved.
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bro. laBarron....

    this is the kind of read that keeps me toasty through these holidays and nights....

    bringing in the new year quite nicely with this one, my brotha!

    thank you

    a
     
  3. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot: :hot:

    did i mention that i think it's hot?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    word dem keyz coz ya tips on a blaze
    tyght flow of love :toast:
     
  5. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brother, you sure know how to lay it down. Thanks for being my mentor!
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...

    i am with A~ on
    this one...

    winter snow love~
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Klabarron

    I'm in agreement with Alyce......this piece is sumthin' you can wrap up in a blanket and sip your warm tea to on a cold winters day!

    What a splendid read!!

    Continue sharing those proses!

    N2
     
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