Black Poetry : One LOOK

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by osEYEris, Sep 3, 2003.

  1. osEYEris

    osEYEris Member MEMBER

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    One look in your eyes makes me realize.
    Nobody but you can take me up, to my highest highs.
    Nobody but you can make me feel, like I'm in Ecstasy.
    Whenever you leave, all I can see is you right next to me.
    But I'm glad you are here, better yet I'm glad your mine.
    To you, I'll give all my affection, To you, I'll give all of my time.
    Funny how I never thought that I would feel this way.
    I'm amazed by the things you do, captured by the words you say.
    My heart beats rapidly, whenever you are around.
    If you were a sea of happiness, In you I'd gladly drown.
    You make my day, in every way, my nights you make them better.
    There are times we disagree, but always come together.
    You know just how to keep me smiling, truly a special soul.
    For you I'd travel many miles, for just your hand to hold.
    And just when I think I've seen it all, you suprise me once again.
    Showing me things I never seen, taking me places I never been.
    I must say I'm truly fortunate, to be the big fish on your hook.
    My lover, my friend til the end, and all it took was One look.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that's all it takes .....flow on
    like dis flow here
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    osEYEris...one look at dis and u cant help but feel ya flow :)
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very tight and heart felt. I loved it.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am feelin this nice flow
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DEEP....REAL DEEP....I LIKE THIS HEA MAN.....1