Black Poetry : One Last Time

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  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our hands intermingle
    our legs intertwine
    we hold each other
    one last time
    holding, holding
    afraid to let go
    gently sliding, gliding
    moving so slow
    breathing, breathing
    in unison and rhythm
    feeling, feeling
    sensations of our dance
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat one last dance
    felt so good
    in my heart
    i knew we could
    slid N' glid
    cross da floor
    in my arms
    as i beckon for more
    that last touch
    i clutch in my mind
    da dance
    dis last tyme.........

    I love how u express da emotional feelin da embrace
    felt like i was their dancing beside u ....very nice
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and the music we made was sooOOO.......oooohhhh beautiful.:)

    does it have to end now
    does it have to be the last time
    i hold you...as mine
    as our legs are intertwined
    and we gracefully move
    as one
    does it have to be over
    when this dance is done
    slowly
    i think of
    losing you
    when we're through
    i wonder
    does it have to be
    if i plead
    would you stay with me
    for more than
    one...last...intermingling......dance.:(

    THANK YOU
    for the romance.
     
  4. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$Rich$$ and Baller, you two are very persuasive with you two on the floor, my guess is there would be at least one more.:wink:
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know I feel you... :)

    alyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed that very last one save for me !!!
     
  7. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maybe if I sing you a song
    you would offer me this final time
    kiss your soul
    before
    we untied the tie
    that binds
    this last time
    can we
    dance
    as if it were
    the first time?
    Remember the moment
    when we first came together
    as our heart music
    directed our paths
    as we dance into
    each other's soul
    this last time
    can truly become the first time again.
     
  8. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gaylee

    Imaginative! Wonderfully done!!! Very Romantic...

    Reas
     
  9. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce, Rich, Reason- thank you all for your kind words and for feeling this piece. You know you all bring me so much romance too.

    Bishop, you do make a girl want to dance again.
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hey ain't nothing wit that

    you know ain't nothing wrong
    with one last time

    DSS
     
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