Quiet Poetry Lounge : One Kiss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Mar 23, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You look at me with so much passion it scares me.
    Is it possible that you want me just that much?
    Wondering how long it will be before you act on your thoughts.
    Kisses so deep and sweet as honey send shivers up and down my skin.
    Your hands follow and warm those spots that seem overly cool from excitment.
    In my head I see bright oranges and brilliant reds dance around as I try to get a grip of my emotions.
    The passion is contagious and all consuming.
    I can't think straight, my pulse is erratic and above all else every nerve in my body is on end.
    I want you to make love to me, and to take me out of this life into another where there is no need to stop.
    Then the kiss ends and I look in you eyes and your eyes mirror my thoughts.
    So where do we go from here?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the sweet beauty of the eyes
    can be warm go wit da heart
    as it carry into a journey so
    divine flow on lovin it .........
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love
     
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    That was HOT!! That Was SO HOT
    I'm lovin it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fiery images in this flow, keep on writing, poet.
     
  6. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well composed

    more than i can say
     
  7. GYMEFORTE

    GYMEFORTE Active Member MEMBER

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    that's what it's all about,that kiss,that look,that love
    look me up,get some though from my cup..
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this is nice
    like this flow
    keep dropping
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this

    i had to bring this one back to the top
     
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