Quiet Poetry Lounge : ONE IS ENOUGH

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by L.P, Jun 27, 2004.

  1. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can miss what's real
    out there playing the field
    you don't need three or four
    the right one can mean much more
    to satisfy all your needs,that number one
    can make you believe
    slow your roll
    going from face to face
    you end up with no one to embrace
    greed in love have conquered the best
    when you treated it like a contest
    bouncing from one to another
    you'll find yourself losing your true lover
    how will you ever know
    what you've got
    always running in and out
    one love can bring you peace
    there's really no reason to increase
    cool yourself down don't get to hot
    making you overlook
    what you've already got
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Playing the field in search of something better, when you already have what you need. Definitely food for thought, the truth usually is.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well felt scribe this speaks out
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is nothing like finding your one true love. Hands down, no question.
     
  5. MrBlak

    MrBlak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very good read!!

    Alot of people could stand to read this and recognize you dont throw away a good thing just cuase it aint perfect, because you think mr perfect (or mrs perfect) is "out there" waiting for you. You dont reject someone from getting to even be in a relationship just cuase they aint the man (or woman) of your dreams. So many try to play the field and end up with nothing and have no one to blame but them self.

    Nice poem!
     
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