Black Poetry : ONE HITTER QUITTER (unfin.)

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She was a one hitter quitter
    Had a brotha all bitter
    I was thinking luv

    Baby girl played me like.............Whaaaaat
    Love, you got me all bent
    Im a new age women, shhh I just wanted to hit
    Ya know Ive asssume the role of a man
    Yeah, your in love but I got other plans
    I wanted show you how it feels
    when you think somethings real
    it was a hit & run, what you feel like road kill!
    Ha haha, aint that how you brothas do it
    Talk sweet to us, just to get to it

    She told me this not taken a breath, she was so fluent
    Believed soley in what she thought
    Hollered it was my fortune... that I bought
    See her thing was, I approached her with no real intentions
    Told me when I told her I was interested, somethings I forgot to mention
    So to get a jump start on are game
    She took the driver seat and drove the plane
    Leading me right into her Bermuda triangle
    Had a brother feeling confident thinking he done found the angle
    But really it was her little trick
    I didnt pick up on the glitch
    Oh Oh you got me this time,, that litte bbbb

    Really, I cant even be bitter
    Cause honesly the plan was for her to be
    A ONE HITTER QUITTER1


    Lj
     
  2. Luver2B

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    This is my current favorite. I am laughing, and shaking my head at the same time.
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :driveby: WOW, THnks LUVER2B, I appreciate you comments, and I enjoy your writing as well!
     
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    A bitter pill to swallow when you wanted it to be more, keep those flows coming, poet of the week.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gotta love the honesty...
    sometimes we go in with
    one intention and get completely
    turned around...and sometimes
    lost...I must say this made
    me giggle a little...
    love that title..."One hitter quitter"...
    it was perfect...
    great story line...

    Flow on...Poet of the Week...You are def' holdin it down :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    wooooooweeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    look out now tyte drop THEONE flow on poet of the week
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was hot
    nice one
    very nice
    flow on.....Angel
     
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    A Hit!

    I Loved it

    Then quit it.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THNKS, FAM, you know how it is when you think you got the only fast ball, and all of a sudden she throws a curve, whooo
     
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