Black Poetry : one glass world

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Mar 16, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One glass world

    A different taste to the world, so transparent
    One could be joy, one could be sour
    One could be strength, one could be power
    Anotha glass could be weakness
    It’s all a choice, but woefully implanted
    In the mind
    But what would we choose if we were blind?
    See there’s only one choice, one chance
    All of us wishing for one last dance
    In reminiscent thoughts of liquid thoughts
    Half full, half empty which resembles the stance

    Other glasses exist, but its divinity is unknown
    Some features air and osmotic molecules
    Free or ridicule
    Its state is racist to other shots
    Downright pitiful
    One will love u, but when u swallow, she’ll belittle u
    And one will cry
    With a hand outstretched
    When glasses spill inches from, what will they sketch?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hold up dis was awesome
    now i love how it was crafted and laid
    out to da page ya pen is too tyte
    let dat ink runnnnnnnnnn!!!!!
     
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    Bravo Spokesman, I really enjoyed your poem!
     
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    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for you replies
    good to know at Least somebody feels me
     
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    I liked this read about perspectives, keep the flow going.
     
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    nice I like it
     
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    tyte piece dude...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Brother...

    this was def' a 10

    Scribe on...
     
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