Black Poetry : One Fu pt.2

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dedicated to cousin Larry baby for beatin' me like a step-child 6 games in a row in chess and talkin' all that smack the whole time. hahaha. It was all about game 7.

    I let my bishop
    slip n
    slide n
    di -
    agonal
    angles
    strangle
    yo' rook don't look
    I'm blastin'
    plastic castles
    I'm past yo'
    last row
    of mc killas
    enter yo' villa
    like dawn of the deadly
    but this ain't thrilla
    yo' pawns is spread see
    when it's war I hate you
    tastin' blood when I mate you
    break you
    take you
    to the rim it's
    limits
    you can't face boo
    chase you
    make you race through
    traces of lyrical shrapnel
    lyrically crack yo' back no
    chance fo' dat flow
    on my way back from places
    you still tryin' to get to
    hit you wit' true wit you
    still can't spit boo
    catchin' mad head winds
    like dead zones
    ya head's blown and thrown
    when I freak a flow
    and uh...
    thereIgothereIgothereIgo

    Come feel the force of my one fu
    be tha one to run through
    my one two and undo
    these web words I spun boo
    it's untrue
    half of the ish they construe
    but you can try again when you
    come to...
    haHA

    don't trip, it's all in fun...
     
  2. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol. I love the way this piece flows.
    Nice work.
    Wish I'd read pt 1. I mite go c if I can find it :)

    *Emma*
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL cute piece, fun read, i think i need to peep out part 1 also



    am
     
  4. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) Thanx ya'll. The first part is off topic, or isn't about chess
    so I didn't post it.
     
  5. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A poem about chess? This is lyrical flow at its best. Keep on keepin on.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo but you got one at least
    now just keep winning

    yo this piece
    was ill
    on some hip-hop chess shhhhhhhhhh

    DSS
     
  7. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Sista Steele! I wrote this awhile back
    when I had game lol.

    DSS Thanx brah! Yeah I got him in 7 but I
    ain't plannin' no victory parties yet.
    Much love, folks!
     
  8. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Cindy! I'm no devil tho! Working too hard to be
    saintly:lol: whew! if only you knew.
    God bless!
     
  9. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feelin' this
     
  10. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and love to ya!