Black Poetry : One failed attempt at "HER"

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me Mrs., but is there any chance that we, as in you and me can enjoy each other
    I mean…… I don’t mean to bother…….., and I cant help but to stutter
    But Im memorized, capsized, a boat stranded on you island
    If you were the black hole, Id be lost, cause I couldn’t help but to fall in


    And she said!

    Im sorry, Im just not ready
    No, No time for love, Im trying to stay steady
    Too much work to do
    Im sorry sweetie, its not you
    When???? I haven't got a clue!
    Maybe tomorrow or possibly another day
    I dont know when Ill have time, you just have to wait

    And he said!

    Come on girl........... Im serious
    Infact Ill admit.... quite curious
    I know theres more than meets the eye
    Baby Girl............Please stop playing shy

    And she said

    Oh your so cute, but really I cant
    Once again I tell you.... I have no time for a man
    Im a business women, so business it is
    I work, work, work, and take care of my kids!

    And he said

    Come on Baby, do you have time
    Any Time to unwind
    Maybe a movie.... Lunch.....dinner would be fine
    I aint in it, just to hit
    I just want you to have some fun, come on girl get wit it.

    And she said

    Right……….. you just want ME to have some fun
    So you can try and tap it……….. and be done
    But sweetie it takes a little more than that
    To even get close to this cat
    Yeah you got game
    I cant deny that!

    And he said

    I got game……….. you cant deny that
    Im so cute!!!!!!!!! But yet I still fall flat
    Flat on my face when it comes to you
    Tongue wagging… Chasing my tail
    But only when it comes to you……………..
    Id label myself the biggest player in the world
    Unitl I met your challenge,
    Now Im like 0 for, and my score with
    Women has turned into a negative balance.
    All my game, good looks and positives have went for nothing
    I must admit you’re a strong women
    And for a brotha like me you just aint budging
    I cant even trip…. And really I applaud your sincerity
    Truth be told this is what draws me, and makes you so real to me
    So just know you have inherited a fan
    Maybe tomorrow when you walk by
    Ill press my luck again!





    Lj
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ha Ha... :wink: Trials of a Player....LOL
    Nice drop!
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks, thnks,
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word...gotta hope the gift of gab can grab
    the cat in da bag....;)
    on point brotha...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well you tried. And perhaps when she sees you're for real, she'll open the door. Glad you dropped this, good reading ya again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i hear ya in echoes .............
     
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