Black Poetry : One dude woke up mind broke up bad dream and need mad steam

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One dude woke up mind broke up bad dream and need mad steam

    For coffee concerned about his shoes turned on the news tv screen

    Listed the updates, and the corrupt fates overnight the scandals

    He could never handle turned to weather channel now sandals

    On his feet, opinions somehow sways, nowadays corruption is stealth

    Like the production of wealth it’s captitalistic perhaps ballistic self

    Control is deft and bold said words at a feast that disturbed the peace

    He was feeling dizzy dealing with DRAKE drizzy on CD increased

    His HIPHOP now his gift is sick have to use arithmetic to combine

    The totals but he can’t add up bad luck doe can look dumb online

    To him this THANKSGIVING stuff deep not enough sleep a blind

    struggle because his mind puzzled truck guzzle too much divine

    fuel and times are cruel find himself in duel like Mr McCloud on

    HIGHLANDER chop off head in a drop dead moment get strong

    From the after math now on a disaster path really lost in traffic

    THANKSGIVING no work a great repriece raked leaves a graphic

    Sight now he fire up the grill and thie require skills the charcoals

    Start to burn he was smart to leran about barbecue techniques told

    In books really needed a map of the land to adapt plans a bowl

    Of potater salad haters invalid but steak meat is great to eat being

    A **** thug he went to Sam’s Club bought some ribeye I’m seeing

    He’s not a dumb guy he was filled with hope and the grill smoke

    Smelled through the neighborhood and the flavor was good choked

    The average by stander the grill was burning strong that’s no joke

     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    powerful vibe here!!!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bishop I needed that
     
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